All Comments on 'Triad Ch. 01'

Nice start. Hope there's more to come.

Very good read. Looking forward to the continuation.

Well written and engaging. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Great story, hurry back with more!

You obviously have writing experience and discipline; this first chapter leaves me waiting eagerly for the rest of the tale to unfold so I can see the characters fully developed. It also makes me want to get off my ass/make time for my own writing.

More please....

I am intrigued...wondering where this one is going...have some thoughts...we'll see!

Gotta love it when reading someone's story inspires one to up one's own game. This is great. On to chapter two!

Just stumbled across your story and it seems like I've got a new author to add to my favourites list! Really good writing, can't wait to see where the story goes and I hope your other stories are as good as this one seems to be.

HOT !!!! so happy there is another part. Extremely intelligent young woman knows the long game will get her what she wants