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All Comments on 'Trials of Atlas Bk. 01: Prologue'

by Young_Atlas

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gregsjlngregsjlnover 7 years ago
Ughhhh come on....

Hey seriously great story, as in intro it would have done a lot better with more than one page

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pretty Cool

I really loved what you did here, but a page or two more would have been nice. Can't wait to read what's next!

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