by Theurgy
This is thoughtful and written well but doesn't belong in "Lesbian Sex" as it isn't an erotic story. It should have been posted to "Reviews & Essays" or the "Non-Erotic" categories. Not rating this until it is reposted in the proper section. Don't know how this got past the reviewing process but somebody really dropped the ball on this one.
"the wiles and scheming of women"??? This is insulting and I would be shocked if it were written by a woman.
after reading your story, go to http://tribbing.com to see tribbing videos
Why have you posted a wierd description of tribbing? People are clicking this to read erotic stories and not to read an essay. It shouldn't be in this section.
I tought it's a wonderful, sexy essay about lesbian tribbing...and the focus seems to be the description of males, penis, male penis and penetration by the penis and getting pleasure from that "always". And also a description of how it stands up and what that means methaphorically. X-D
I am a lesbian, it was kind of awkward and I had to skip all of those parts..
Otherwise, i would have liked it! :) keep up the writing.
The writing and prose of the story - Beautiful. However, less comparison and reference to penis and penetration would have elevated this story to Excellence and Elation had ii truly took A Deep(er) Look At F/F Tribbing. I love the sexual act and the efforts of the writer. Thank you