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kurtrellianskurtrelliansover 6 years ago

Great story. The Lara Croft based character Marion was really well created (I have not read your earlier Lara stories yet). The semi humourous, bumbling, upper class, sexually motivated beauty, Marion really worked well. She certainly made me come, in a big way! Excellent work, well crafted!

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