All Comments on 'Tricia's Burn'

This was good. Your writing wasn't half bad, or even 10% bad. Easy to read and just what I was looking for. The way you described the burning was terrific. I can believe this as a story, it wasn't incredibly unlikely and you make it very obvious what tricia did by the end of the story. You also made the relationship dynamic obvious by having the Dom provide aftercare to his partner, something often missing from stories. Well done!