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The conduct of getting knocked up again and pawning another bastard off on your husband to raise as his own is in itself the worst deception any woman could lay on a man. The fact you did nothing to stop either pregnancy and even justified the second time by having sex with your husband so you could convince YOURSELF that there was a rare possibility that the second bastard belonged to your husband is enough to put you at the top of the bitch from hell list. The fact that you are happy now in the bedroom is not anywhere near the money your husband will have to put out to raise your bastards. You seem the type that sometime in the distant future after the husband has raised your bastards that you will tell the poor schmuck, break his heart, and he will take his own life.....

Bitch

Your story is the fantasy of so many, but your character took that desire the next step and I for one, hope such an event occurs in my own life.

Thank you for the thrilling story, it was great.

What the fuck are you on? I dread to think what I would do if I ever learnt my wife did this to me. Homicide would not be ruled out! Not just the wife and her manslut/manwhore the kids as well probably. This story is why woman like the character and the if the writer is female then her/him too are such disloyal bitches.

what she is doing when her hubby finds out will probably end her marriage fully ...and to not have told him after the first time let along the blackmail....when he finds out mainly because she let the skag mike film her knowing it would be sold is almost saying here dear hubby ill show you what a slut i am...even though he may not watch movies then what about later when they want to spice things up some ...or when one of his mates says hey i saw a woman on a porn movie last night that looked liek your wife...either way one day he will find out...she should have told him then the cops could have been taping what was said and whe nhe made that first move to well i will tell hubby ...they arrest him and he is in prison for years ...maybe they put up the first kid for adoption if it comes back as not his...if she wont do taht maybe they divorce then but then mikee is responsible for paying for his own brat...me ...maybe some other men but me no way would i raise anothers mans kid by my wife when i was married to her ...it would be a choice either get rid of it or im gone ...but now what happens when he finds out ..divorce ...sue mikee ...probably sue the film company ..yes he will probably end up with money from one maybe both ...but if a dna test shows hes not daddy to one or either which is a good possibility as this story is written if neither is his the divorce becomes a slam dunk for him ....never mind how hurt her betrayal makes him...the thing is now he knows he can never trust her either...so with that also goes whatever respect he had for her...so here it is maybe 5 years maybe even more but what happens to her when all of a sudden she is divorced and the father cant pay then social services will step in and help her ..either way she has now totally screwed up 4 peoples lives ...even if one of the kids is his or lol both...but again as you describe in this story that is not really possible is it...so if the father cant support the kid what happens maybe they attach his wages maybe it gets social secut=rity till its out of school or 18 either way tha tkid grows up with no parents ....maybe the father can instill some morals maybe the mother has changed but either wa yboth kids will never be the same ...even if he bit the bullet and stayed with her for the kids it wont be the same as maybe since hes been dominating her anyway now in order to saty with him he starts pimping her out...might as well make some money myself off the slut right...or he cant get over it so they just co exist together but with no real trust or love again...still again both kids have been totally fucked up because of their mothers stupidity...wh ycant people just be honest ...to force or black mail a person to me is worse than murder ...as best a man tha twill blackmail a woam nfor sex should have his dick cut off and be castrated ...any way a sorry story

So unless the guy is a transexual with an emplanted embryo the whole story is so much fluff. I dont really care for I cheated on my husband, had another man's babies, and am still married. Without thinking about the medical and physical risk due to fucking around bareback on your spouse what about the genetic and medical problems for the children since the father is not available for information and parts as needed. Sluts as the one described in the story give whores a bad name. She is probably the worst possible example of a wife and mother and really does need to be found out and pushed to the curb. Trash is trash and she needs to be thrown away with her bastards. I have no problem with women fucking around with the husbands full knowledge and consent, you know safe, sane, consensual, but this is just a mindless slut.

It called this woman a bitch dog in heat. That really seems to sum her and her character up rather well. A bitch dog in heat can be mounted by almost anything and she really proves that.

<p>Normally I try not to give out zero if I can, but I have to say this warrants it</p>

<p>While I can't say the sex was bad in story, the problem is you have a victim in the story and two people that are victimizing him. And what hurts your story the most, is that people often don't really get off on watching the unsuspecting victim get the shaft, no matter how much sex you wrap that point up in. Personally I think you may have missed that, in the course of this story. But if that didn't matter to you, no problem its always your choice as well.</p>

<p>Most people would put an unsuspecting man raising his wife's lovers children right up there with her pissing in his bowel of cereal every morning and him not being the wiser, all while she says she does it because she loves him and wants him to carry part of her around with him all day. It's a twisted logic that many readers don't agree with.</p>

<p>This story has her doing this because its easier for her to not have to worry about getting caught cheating, and her and her children's life won't be affected by her cheating. She gets to stay living a comfortable lifestyle that her husband is providing at the expense of the family he thought he helped create, but was betrayed by his wife in that selfish pursuit.</p>

<p>And I know a lot of readers don't like secret cheating where one side gets grossly abused in the story and they never resolve it.</p>

-Risq

please ignore the haters... I can't believe these guys hang out here, read the stories, and then spew their venom. Guess they just can't admit to themselves how much your story turns them on! *L*

fucking in all those stories but sorry a guy who gets a hard on molesting kids and destroying there future cause one day it will be clear the father is not the father, this is just mindless and sick. you could have written a good story but there are limits and you don't know them.

well bald sicko - your hook of having a man raise bastards as his own is worse than most else but then thats what you intended.<P>

Evidently very few share your demented absurdity of below human convention and thats as it should be.<P>

It does make us wonder what kind of sicko you really are to spend this much time on so few like you.<P>

Get some help soon as we pity those around you.

you feel are the haters. Even wonder what that thought makes you?

What is wrong with the poeple who have left such sick comments ? Like one of the other feedbacks, I have to conclude that this writer's story has hit very close to home for some people.

The story itself is well written and has some good scenes in it. Not every story has to have a disney-style ending!

When are some of you going to realise that these stories are just stories, designed to evoke an emotional response. Clearly this is an excellent one because it has evoked such strong emotions in people, whether they like those emotions or not.

It's not very sexy to use a story line that has been done so many times in this genre, but the stupidity of an author who makes his heroine so placidly dumb just takes any reading value out of it. Pull your head out for some daylight and then try something else.

....or not? You can't have it both ways.Pistolpackinpete

This well told tale has stirred deep emotions in so many readers who seem to delight in insulting the tricked woman

Yes, TRICKED. So many comments damming this poor woman.

2000 years ago, God said, the first stone must be thrown by some-one who has never done anything wrong.

Think about it guys, have you never been tricked?

The real fool here is the man who took advantage of an overheard conversation. A few hours of pleasure for eternity in hell.

There is certain pain ahead for this woman,her husband and her children. But, and I write from experience, there is hope because Jesus also said that he will never turn away anyone who comes to him for help.

Too bad the majority of comments are by idiots that don't REALIZE this is FANTASY and nothing more. I wonder if they get so angry when they watch cartoons too.

It is sad this does really happen to women and then they become property to the trickster who then uses her till she is of no use then she is discarted as trash. Sad it happens. Good story good ending!

the biggest betrayal by the english slut is trying to pass off the kids as the husband's. but i love it when the english get fucked!!

poopchootkaboose of his many times taking it in the pooper, pulling a train by getting popped in the caboose, good times

A once faithful wife who betrays her husband for a cheap ass fucking. All the sympathy for her in the beginning disappeared when she turned into a cheap butt slut! A std and a "brutal" ass fucking by her husband is what she deserves right before he kicks her adulterous ass to the curb ... stupid cunt!

Great story, both chapters. I was hoping to find out that her husband Jeff had actually put this guy up to the whole thing.

.... the story is listed as non consent but when the wife stated she enjoyed the sex with Mike and even had orgasms she was no longer being forced! What she became was "just" another Three Hole Cum Dump tramp looking for an excuse to betray her faithful husband. Next time baldy"CUCK"2 take your cheating WHORE wife Apologist agenda and put it in the Fetish category where the degenerate, closet dwelling losers like yourself can celebrate trash like this!

10 Big Blazing Stars for the writer. It is an amazing story about blackmailing an attractive wife to do things that would fulfill hubby's fantasy, but then enjoys it so she becomes afraid to tell hubby the truth. LOL The wife is put in an impossible position. She should have trusted hubby and told the truth. LOL Either way she got some great sex out of the deal. Fulfilled hubby's fantasy, only hubby hasn't a clue. I would be so pissed but only because she NEVER told me the truth! LOL Thanks Buster2U