All Comments on 'Tricks and Treats'

stories where pieces of shit are heros

those scared to reveal themselves leave abusive annonymous comments.

Liked where this is going, can't wait for the next part :)

Wow, what an opening chapter. Captivating storyline. Descriptive writing. Naive virgin. Perverted fiancee. All hallows eve party. Anonymity (if costumes/masks are present). Unlimited possibilities. You can take this story anywhere from mild exhibition to a black mass! Count me in to read ensuing chapters and possibly to daydream just a little what ms sarah will experience.

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It always amazes me the people who come to an obvious erotic site. Views an obvious Reluctant sexual encounter. Read it!!! and then makes a negative comment on it. I find myself rolling around laughing my ass off at such hypocrisy. I know they secretly enjoyed it and will be back for the next chapter. It feels so good to feel dirty. Thanks to my enthusiastic readers, I love you all.

Cant wait to read the next chapter.

Pt. 2 is at this moment sitting in the 'pending' box. Check back again to see it when it is approved. I enjoyed writing it, but I enjoy your comments and feedback even more.

The story continues. Don't Miss Ch 02.