All Comments on 'Tricks for the Treats'

by voluptuary_manque

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TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
VM!

You are truly twisted. I loved it! What goes on in your mind is scary!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story

Looks like I'm attending all the wrong Halloween parties... Great story, seriously twisted and flawlessly executed.

Good luck in the contest!

TE999TE999over 15 years ago
Clever and imaginative

Great piece of writing VM. Descriptive and unique in both plot and execution. Kudos, ol' bruin. Good luck in the contest.

Safe_BetSafe_Betover 15 years ago
Hey Dude!

What a great story! You are even kinkier than I thought you were! ;)

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 15 years ago
Now that was fun.

Nice story and good imagination. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Amazing

I'm thoroughly surprised at the story. Amazing job and keep up the kinkiness.

oggbashanoggbashanover 15 years ago
Tentacle tenure?

Thanks for showing a novel way to achieve academic tenure. No wonder the staff stay.

Og

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 15 years ago
Wow!

That is one kinky campus, wonder what student life is like? Nice one VM.

JiminPaJiminPaover 15 years ago
Well done

Wonderful, erotic and very Kinky! My kind of story!

MunachiMunachiover 15 years ago
nice story...

i wonder if i should go to my university's parties more often... you never know...

michchick98michchick98over 15 years ago
Vivid

What a vivid imagination you have, VM. This was the first story of yours I've read and I do intend to read others now. Good luck in the contest.

starrkersstarrkersover 15 years ago
Wow

Haven't read anything of yours before. Guess I've been missing out bigtime! Loved it.

princessjennieprincessjennieover 15 years ago
Good, cheeky fun!

It was like kids on a kiddie ride, they just want to keep going and going :D Ejoyable read!

loganforesterloganforesterover 15 years ago
Very creative!

You certainly have a knack for coming up with unique ideas. Very entertaining. Good Luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very creative

A very interesting read. It held my interest all the way through. I could almost see the characters. Very creative. Thank you.

Happy holidays.

PositiveThinkerPositiveThinkerover 15 years ago
Sorry

Sorry, I can't get the hang of this. I forgot to log in. That last comment, very creative was from me.

wildbanker55449wildbanker55449over 14 years ago
Great Off-Center Story

Terrific read. I actually had to go back and read it a secind time to follow the switch in character to Teddy. Nice twist and good storytelling. Needs a follow-up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago

Started off slow but picked up rather quickly, all in all very nice

lorrisuelorrisuealmost 10 years ago
Not usually my type of read--

But well written and engaging

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