All Comments on 'Triggers Ch. 01'

Hope you continue the story and play around with more of the idea of her thinking she's at home all by herself.

Pants of any kind and no underwear? The yeast infections, the chafing, the baginal discharge...gross and painful.

Plus the effects will be noticeable and that will create questions, questions without answers which lead to even more questions. And that becomes a problem. What happens when commands start to interfere with other commands? Since you can't create feelings of love, what happens when he commands her to love him? Or love what he's doing? It's called the law of unintended consequences and I don't see how he can foresee those.

waiting for chapter 2

Just wanted to encourage you to ignore the score and to keep writing! 14 favorites is something!

I really enjoyed this first chapter and looking forward to seeing where you take it.

But ...

I did miss the part, why she did go to the hypnotists? To make it more realistic / plausable.

I sort of agree with the problems mentioned about no lingerie ever but there are ways to combat those problems. Frequent bathing and baby powder come to mind.

There needs to be a back story so we know how this plan started. Why does he lust for his sister-in-law anyway?

More plot please.