by IanSaulWhitcomb
Awwwwww, kinda kinky and sooooo cuuuuuuute! That made me smile. The world needs more Trini!
Thanks! I've been trying to figure out a new Trini story for a while, but I was kind of fixated on getting Liz into the picture and it just took me forever to find a reason that felt right. Hopefully there won't be as big a delay on the next one ...
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Much appreciated! Obviously, my fingers are crossed for the contest ... but getting nice comments is just as big a deal to me, so as far as I'm concerned, I'm already a winner!
I like the idea but maybe I am just a dumb country boy and found it hard to follow. Sorry maybe it was just me after reading other comments
Thanks for commenting! I try to walk a fine line when it comes to spelling all the information in a story out. As a reader, I really enjoy inferring things the writer has written "between the lines." But I know that's not everyone's preferred style, and of course there's no guarantee that I get everything right when I'm trying to write things into the story with implication instead of overt description. Sorry it didn't hit on all cylinders for you!
You have great way of telling a story that is both hot and interesting. You are now one of my favorite authors on Literotica.
Thanks so much! There are a pretty good number of super authors here, so I take that as a high compliment!
Your shemale stories are some of the best that I have read. I would like to read more about Trini and Wyn, hopefully them settling down and Trini retiring from the sex work. I'd also like to read about Wyn and Trini going exclusive, and forgoing condoms in a committed relationship. I hope that Trini retires from sex work, follows Wyn to Seattle and they settle into domestic life as a couple.
Thanks for commenting! The right story idea has to come to me before I can write a Trini story, so I can never really predict where things will go next. But we’ll see!
I've been away from literotica for a while, but I was absolutely delighted to see that you had posted something new. I wasn't surprised at all to enjoy your work, but I was refreshed to read a story that moved me so. New and old characters were engaging and delightful, and the story stirred genuine emotions and reactions. You remain my absolute favorite author in this site and one of best anywhere. I was completely satisfied with the resolution, but now I want to know how Wyn and Trini enjoyed their Valentine's Day.
I would love to see them just embrace each other and their love, but I imagine that Trini might have extra incentive to express herself physically. There could also be a potential violation of Trini's confidentiality policy, which I appreciate as much as your consistency in maintaining it. The bottom line is that this was Liz and Carly's love story, and you kept it focused on them. To add more of Trini and Wyn would've taken away from that, but you left me wanting more of the characters and the story. Kudos! [I left this out at first; but when I decided to include a side note, it turned into a paragraph.]
I loved how the plot unfolded, and particularly, Liz's phone call to Wyn. It served multiple purposes, including filling Carly in on details; but I especially liked her asking for permission. I also deeply appreciate Trini's humanizing sexual restraint and Liz's clear perception of it. Genuine respect and multidimensional characters, with distinct and develped personalities, go so far in connecting with the reader.
As I've gushed on enough, I'll only add that I enjoyed this much more after being repulsed by another story whose chapters currently litter the top Hall of Fame posts in this category.
I'm really glad you singled out the phone call as a highlight -- it's one of my favorite parts of the story too, both from a perspective of story construction and because it just plain tickles me whenever I reread it. It was also important to me that the story have a very sensitive side to it, which is part of why it took me a while to get around to writing this new installment in Trini's saga. I knew I wanted to keep Liz involved, but I also knew neither Liz nor Trini would ever risk hurting Wyn, so for a long time I was stumped as to how I could get them into bed together.
Where things will go from here, I don't know, but thank you very much for letting me know how you felt about the story and for the thoughtfulness of your response to it!
Very clever and entertaining. Loved the main characters in the series
Wow, thank you for the high praise! Trini is one of my favorites, so it’s extra-nice to hear that someone puts her at the top of their list.)
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I really enjoyed this series.
Fun characters, well plotted, well constructed, entertaining situations, and hot. I'd love to see more, if your muse strikes again.
Thanks.
I’m always delighted to hear that readers enjoyed a series, so thank you immensely for commenting!
I share your hope that my Trini muse will strike again soon ...
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.... fucking making me tear up at the ending of a smut story. How dare you?
I can be diabolical like that sometimes ...
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Thanks for commenting!
@Joann69
I don't know that a new Trini story will be hopping down the bunny trail, but thank you for the encouragement!