All Comments on 'Trinity Finishing School Ch. 04'

by ProfRighteous

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Keep Going

Please continue this story. Pretty please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oh my

I am so wet reading this and I want to get my ass punished by the teacher.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Tag for the choking next time. Your dialog gets over the top silly very quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Five Stars

Very hot sex scene, even if "man batter" is a pretty funny euphemism; like written porn from the old days. Still, more. We need to see these young cunts abused and severely disciplined and Hugh Jorgens is just the man to do it.

PussyforUsePussyforUsealmost 7 years ago
Love playfulness

I hope you write more. I love the playfulness of author tone combined with the seriousness of the male characters.

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 7 years ago
Dialogue is too cheesy

but it only takes away from the story a bit.

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