by justgottawrite
I love how 20 year old Jason says to his mother, with his fat young cock up his own mother's cunt up to his balls, "Mom, I feel like I've waited my entire life for this. I feel like you made me just for you, that I came out of you destined to be back inside for the rest of things." For any young male, nothing can compare with having his cock up the same hairy hole he came out of, pumping away like mad at his own damn birth canal, and finally blowing his balls and splattering a great twatful of semen up inside the twat of all his boyish dreams. His own mommy's glorious ever-loving twat!
Since we already know how they end up (married with kids etc) you could keep the same scenario going as this one, where you give us a glimpse into their current life, but then he takes a trip down memory lane again and remembers the following day after their first time. You could keep that same thing going for a few chapters.
That would make a decent series. The next one is them dating and planning their lives together and the next one is them moving to a new town etc.
This could be a fantastic series and I would love to see how their beginnings progress into the debauchery we read in the first chapter.
that killed this story. there is ZERO love here. wow what a whore...
Was great, until the sex party mention = instant 1-star. That shit doesn't belong in an incest story. How can there be authors that don't know that obvious and basic rule? It was otherwise pretty solid.