All Comments on 'Triple Play Pt. 01'

Title was misleading... story ended way to early, even for a part 1. Left me looking for a little more as a part 1....some proofreading needed...overall good though.

How story description mentions three women, named & described at start, & another (I believe her name-spelling changes some) just appears & is mentioned more at end.

Page 1 was getting good. What happened, dog eat the rest of the story????

I'm happy you've abandoned the story, simply because it was absolute shit. Don't mean to be a dick, but you sacrificed character development and story progression, and got NOTHING in return. There is an absolute lack of realism both in character and circumstance, and you never bothered setting anything up. In fact, it doesn't even qualify as a completed stroke story!

Just give up now, man. For our sakes.