by next2ArchStanton
Still a well developed and funny story...The problem with this kind of plots is to find a way to end them well, and make it still be funny...Let's wait and see what the author has reserved for the ending...3* for now
cares enough to comment. It is a fantastical tale, quite well written, but at least three pages were wasted explaining the rotation, how it worked, etc that were not needed.