All Comments on 'Triple Treats Pt. 02'

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impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
Still a well developed and funny story...

Still a well developed and funny story...The problem with this kind of plots is to find a way to end them well, and make it still be funny...Let's wait and see what the author has reserved for the ending...3* for now

patilliepatillieover 8 years ago
Two comments says it all, no one is reading this all the way thru, or

cares enough to comment. It is a fantastical tale, quite well written, but at least three pages were wasted explaining the rotation, how it worked, etc that were not needed.

gmann57gmann57over 8 years ago

Still here. Intrigued , good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

die, dickheaded fag.

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