All Comments on 'Trish's Place... Ch. 02'

by jaismith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well done.

I enjoyed reading this chapter. I'm counting the days to the next chapter. You should continue with this story. Would have been a higher score except for the guy at the beginning.

Rad'lRad'labout 13 years ago
Again - very well written.

I din't mind the guy at the beginning; his presence set the stage beautifully for the scenes that followed Thanks.

Bridget69Bridget69about 6 years ago
Not a good start

but more than made up for it with the addition of Becky.

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