All Comments on 'Trish's Place... Ch. 09'

Great overall story, I look forward to every chapter. Very good balance, reasonable characters, good grammar, nice pace. In other words one of the best on this site.

One thing though, and maybe you're tiring, or Chpt. 9 wasn't 'baked' long enough, but Ellie thought about "wondering about the 'mechanics' of three women having unbridled sex in the same bed." Then I thought you rushed by that part at the end of Chpt. 9. Not that I'm complaining, but you write the sex parts very well, and I just thought you kinda short-changed this scene. You see, I was wondering too...

Keep up the good work, looking forward.

Why do you feel it is necessary for your characters to smoke weed to get themselves horny? Can't their eyes make them want each other without being drunk or stoned? Or is it a prop when a lesbian seduces a straight(?) girl/woman?

Isn't it better to just get "in the mood" naturally?