All Comments on 'Trivial Pursuits Ch. 17'

Props to you!

Dear titania,

Yet another chapter exceptionally written. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

I do have one question. How many more chapters are you planning on writing until the (ever so dreadful) end is reached?

Yours sincerely

- DF

Do we see more than subtle hints that Alessa is shedding some of her neurotic behavior? I like the finely calibrated way you are doing it. Also, thanks for introducing me the Lucius and this specific song. Very appropriate to the them of this story! Kudos!

Big, puffy heart, capital L.O.V.E. them. I'm nervous because something is going to go terribly wrong before we (hopefully) get our HEA. Can i just put my head in the sand and pretend it'll all be smooth sailing?

I had no problem in the the pace of the story or the development of the characters. It was enjoyable to the extent that I looked forward to getting back to it each day. Thanks for letting me share this couple's journey. I don't know if you plan on continuing, but I would look forward to it. Let me know,

Thanks again

I have completed 18 and it is now off to my editor. I haven't spoken with her yet about turn around time, so depending on how busy she is this weekend, I may be able to post AT THE EARLIEST Sunday night, but it may be a few days later. I'll keep you posted if it will be longer than Tuesday.

Titania

I just submitted Ch 18, so it should be up Thursday morning. Friday at the latest unless something goes awry.

Enjoy!

Titania

Can't wait for chapter 18!!!

These characters have invaded and seem constantly in my thoughts and life.

Is the sexiest, smoothest, most thoughtful guy I've ever had the pleasure to read about on Lit. You're doing such a great job, it hurts.