by Perky_Goth_Chick
I liked the story, great job on the tricky balance of humor and sex. I also liked the author 'picture'.
This was really fun to read--both erotic and slyly funny. The way you set up the encounter--which could have easily been a rape--so that it was basically consensual and enjoyable for both of them, while still being interesting made this story fun to read. I also enjoyed the way you've created a sarcastic and smart main character, and I hope to read more of her experiences.
The main character was very clever and very quick witted! It was a joy to read her character stumble upon this strange and erotic event. Everything was charming, right down to her inner dialogue. Absolutely fine work!
LoL i liked it, funny too. I hope like hell you have the decency to write more chapters in this storyline. Because surely you wouldn't be so cruel as to deny your fans, would you? =)
Seriously- humor, plot, context- you are the absolute freakin' BOMB, and are going immediately to the top of my favorites (assuming I remember my account password!)
I love this story. Please write more from "Briar Rose", a great character.
What a funny and sexual story! Great main character and just the right balance between sex and humor. Come to think of it, I may have seen that Troll working at the club a while back :)