All Comments on 'Trophy Wife Ch. 01'

So very good so far. Truly looking forward to more

Awesome story, my slave/ slut wife would love to be chased like this, to be hunted, used when caught.

Keep on writing, looking forward to more.

Thank You,

SteelsMaster

Not only that, but I still so enjoy the smart mouth on many of your female protagonists. :). I am looking forward to the next chapter, too!

I can't decide if this is f*cked up sick sh*t or incredibly hot. Perhaps both. I suppose I wouldn't be so bent if the guys went through some trial of their own. I'm just tired of men always doing to women with impunity. And I'm not a feminazi or uber femdom. I just like balance.

Too much unnecessary violence to be erotic.

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate the feedback, whether good, bad or indifferent. For those of you who are waiting, Chapter 2 has been submitted and should post any day. If you thought the Hunt was tough, just wait until the Ball.

I thought the whole point was being last meant nothing happened to you? Did I miss something?

Maximguy, its not enough to be the last one standing--she had to survive the entire hunt. Thank you for your question, and I hope you enjoy the conclusion.

Great story. Can't wait to see later chapters.

Lovely, hot story! Thanks.

Keep going! Suspense is great but not too long.

Can't wait till hubby comes home, going to fuck like mad!

Looking forward to many more chapters.

Try to keep them a little shorter.

Hey there - new to literotica...just discovered your story. I like it - very well written, nice build up without too much technical description that can sometimes get tedious. I appreciate that. I'm curious to learn what happened to the sexy Latina - it being her first time and all.

Ok, I'm already quite moist but I'm saving myself until after I read part 2 - I'm sure "John" would appreciate that.

The dialogue was just god awful.