All Comments on 'Trophy Wife Reboot Ch. 01'

To know how you chose this theme?

Your previous series was about an adulterous wife who despised her husband and had no remorse.

This begins with punishment for...what? Infidelity? Lack of...respect? Love? Not saluting fast enough? Aging?

In the previous series, your heroine enjoyed her sex episodes. Here, she's just enduring them.

Will be interesting to see where you're going with this.

Remember, the more you write, the more you learn about writing.

Write with emotion. Edit with intellect. Just get it down. Spruce it up later.

So, your first draft may look like your trophy wives at the ranch. Later on, you can apply the Estée Lauder and unpack the Victoria's Secret.

Interesting start, looking forward to reading more

stupid piece of shit story, with no point whatsoever except to degrade women

Trophy wives - good start

I'm more open mind ed to fiction

Not sure, but Nevada requires registration of "pro's"' also condoms at all times, also regular med. checks (I think?)

This is a pretty wild story, I'm looking forward to the rest, its very different from the rest of the usual stuff you read in the loving wives section. I love your imagination thus far.

if you don´t speak it...

it looks stooooopid corny

don´t fucking do it.

thanks