All Comments on 'Tropic of Cum'

That needs some sequels !

Tropic of Cum!

Story is Dumb!

Author couldn't tell

Piss from Rum!

Loved it!

A semi-literate author grows a magic ego that convinces her she has the smarts to write a bad story when she doesn't?

Amazingly well written & lots of fun to read. Had me wet & laughing throughout. Great sexy fun. BTW - to all the asswipe anonymouses who trashed this, where are the Hall Of Fame stories you have written?

It's pretty funny to see some of the stupid shit people post in comments.

Good story! Keep it up

I think a lot of times the smart-ass comments are better and more entertaining than the story.

Story's a little off but the idea i like .:) keep writing don't listen to the naysayers . rafaela i liked it . f them :)

When Siofra got to Irontail, my pants became a Tropic of Cum!

Will Siofra be having anymore adventures? And how many kids is she aiming for? 1st she basically adopts a succubus' child and now she's impregnating elves 😱

ignore the dumb comments, this story was a lot of fun and pretty dang hot. keep it up!