All Comments on 'Trouser Snake 5 : Pt. 1'

Welcome back Scott.

I hope that the second part is ready.

The first 4 were great. This one is a massive set back

I love the series but please for the love of all things holy don't bring Rick into the fuckfest!!

I'm hoping Mrs. Wesley winds up double-stuffed, spit-roasted or just plain gagged with cock. A simultaneous face fuck of the girls sounds like a stellar idea. I have yet to read a piece of yours that is not awesome or strokeworthy. Waiting to see if the secretary follows along and gets fucked on the way. As always roadhead and multitasking blowjobs are a treat. I love when you put out new works and eagerly look forward to every new fantasy from your filthy mind.

please change this story. Hayley getting fucked by someone else would be a terrible end to this great series. Other girls and Priests, Rick etc are best left for spin off writings. The best part about these stories was that Hayley is so naive and wants to help

What a bunch of loses in the comments. Please let Rick fuck Haley. It's only fair. It will also be hot as fuck. Please :)

Rick can convince Hayley he needs help too. I love it and can't see Rick wreck Hayley.

Rick waited long enough lol

Hayley was in to it, now she's about to get raped by rick??? Not good, not good at all

I love that she's so naive yet fucks and sucks like a champ. It adds a layer of taboo and naughty so sexy and morally questionable I can't get enough. The writing is perfectly paced with just enough build up to add excitement not boredom. It's interesting you made the father anything but good looking, I usually find I need the Daddy to have abs and a chiseled jawline, yet it wasn't necessary here seeing as he didn't have to seduce his little one. If anything, his big cock being the only attractive thing about him makes the story hotter. It has been over a year since I found this series and I'm constantly coming back to it (pardon the pun). Especially Trouser Snake Returns. I'm looking forward to reading what's next. I'd love to see Hayley take both her Daddy and Rick. Thank-you for the countless fun times ;) - love.

Yes, please.

I love these sexy trouser snake stories. Also the Jimmy gets a girl series. Your kinks are exactly mine too, except I'm from the woman's perspective. I love just being a little slut knowing a guy is thinking of me that way. I fantasize of being a girl like in Jimmy's stories...... These trouser snake stories are sooo bad, I think I know truly what the kink is behind this, and it turns me on too because it is so taboo. I sent you a message, please send one back!

More please!

Your opinion doesn't matter.

Rick+Hayley - Dream team up

Awesome set up and hot sex, can't wait for part 2. I've been waiting for this set up since it was first mentioned.

When's the next part coming?! I wanna see what happens to Haley!! Love ur stories

Like the housework outfits.

been rereading this series for a few years. Great story, more of this and the angels please

I been gone for a while and thought the Trouser Snake series was over. Glad to see part 5. One of the best series and a personal favorite of mine. This was a bit of a let down Scott, too short, thought I kinda liked it. Miranda is my personal favorite and I wished there was more of her. Maybe a long lost twin or sister close in age can be brought in? Of course, we can't discard Haley, but there's only so much you can do with her. Except maybe a gangbang or something related to her dad's job? I especially liked the pubic display scenes.

Not bad, but not as good as the others were. The problem is that it's almost become routine for George to take advantage of Hayley and maybe other girls the way he has, and the writing reflects that. It's not as exciting as it was for the past few chapters. Hayley has been "tainted" already and actually enjoys the sex at times. We need something different.

Which I think I see in you leading up to by having Hayley possibly do it with Miranda's dad. But besides that, I think we need George to go further in his debauchery. He's only tit-fucked her once before I think, and I think it would be great if he could somehow find an excuse to kiss her during sex. It would almost be like a return to her naive self.

Anyways, I hope part 2 comes out soon and good luck with you

I have no idea why I thought Bernie's name was George, please just ignore that.

How much time you take for next part

I hope not please update soon

It has been years but I still come back to this every couple of months hoping there has been an update. </3

Extremely curious how this will go

One of the most erotic and well-written stories on this site. Waiting for more.

Dude, its been 4 years years.mannn... when is the next part coming.....make some more Bernard-hayley throatfuck,gag

What happened to the first n second of this series