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All Comments on 'Truck Ride With A Twist'
by tdp5592
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Anonymousabout 10 years agoGreat first story
plot and writing are excellent. A little editing and dropping the choking would improve it some. Please keep submitting stories!
Anonymousabout 10 years agoLove this!
Great job developing the characters while still keeping the sex hot, hot, HOT. You've provided a good foundation with many possibilities for future story lines. So, more please!
Oh, and the choking is more than fine with me!
litereader54about 10 years agoGood read
Really great story. But really, an Army guy making the hero of the story a Marine??????
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