by Axelotl
Did you come to this site to preach at people? Wrong place. We dont come to your church or place of worship to show you our fetish fantacies. My personal thought is this is not the place for your scriptures.
I thought this was some well written erotica with a n/c twist. I liked the storyline. Didn't seem like preaching to me... Just a story about some nuns getting it. Enjoyed the ending too, very satisfying. Keep up the good work.
and fairly tight story. I once had an ex who, when she was a trainee nun, told me she'd seduced two priests. Maybe she did, who am I to judge her?
No, I don't think so. Looks like karma in play. And how is pointing out kinky Bible passages preaching? Preachers certainly aren't rolling these quotes on Sunday morning.
Todays sermon is entitled "Why you shouldn't piss off God."
Now let us turn to the page where Sister Alice is butt-fucked. XD
I like an ending where someone gets what they deserve. You don't rape 2 nuns and attempt to turn them into whores. I also like that the 2 nuns were true to their Christian beliefs and helped out Grace, even given what she had done to them. One minor point: Catholic nuns would not be selling "the New American Standard Bible"; rather, they would sell the Catholic Bible (which has more books in it). Most hotels would have either the Gideon Bible or the King James Bible.
Why are you trying to censor other writers by telling them what they can and can't write? That was a hot story.
Great story, maybe the tornado came too early?
You picked the verses cleverly to the story. I also liked those in the end. Silly book...