All Comments on 'True Family Love Ch. 02'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
A bit confusing

So she walked around all day in her nightgown and no one paid any attention to her?

The story needs some editing to make it more believable.

She fucks him one time and is ready to walk out on her family?

Need to be a little more realistic with the plot line.

Give the storyline an edit and re-post with a bit more story telling how she is going to make a decision that will change her life completely. Tell us how she became so disenchanted with her existing life that she is ready to walk away from it.

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