All Comments on 'True Power Ch. 02'

An editor will help smooth the flow of this story and will fix some issues with incorrect words (threw instead of through).

Fixing those will help stop people abusing you later on when this story has more length and readers, even though the issues are only very minor.

I personally think it's a solid start, keep it up!

Keep going, this story has legs.

But 2 very short chapters & then a month wait with nothing! I'll try to remember to check back in a couple years. Maybe there'll be something substantial by then.

This was just getting good! I wish you'd have continued

Unfinished work and disappointed reader.