by Erosite
And brilliantly erotic, romantic...vivid. Thank you for being more cerebral than the bulk of material on this site.
An excellent, well composed story.
The detailed description of the female protagonist evokes an atmosphere and mood of sensuality and intimacy.
In this atmosphere, a well structured and logical plot leads – smoothly linked – step by step to a hot and arousing climax.
All in all, a warm, believable vignette of a hot Chicago afternoon.