All Comments on 'Truth Bared'

Superb characterization.

Needs editing, why did she hide it from him, pretty flimsy reason you gave. Also, learn the difference between 'then' and 'than'. You used the wrong one. Also 'slide' and 'slid'.

Yes there were grammatical errors and word misuse but overall not a bad start. I read the stories for enjoyment. I do notice the errors but you can have the perfect grammatical story ever but if the storyline doesn't appeal to me then I stop reading and move on.

I have to wonder why she felt she had to lie about Victor or hide her bruises from her husband.

Thank you for your feedback I really appreciate it!!! I do agree the story needs editing and am in the process of finding an editor. In time, I hope to fill the gaps in the story you have brought to my attention as well as fix the grammar mistakes.