All Comments on 'Truth or Dare?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Gotta love anonymous idiots

Sounds like she was beautiful to me... And thank you for the short, fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story

It gets tiring reading all the stories where everyone is a porn star or model. This one sounded and felt 'real'. Great story! I'd love to read more of your stuff.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Excellent story. Loved that she had a normal body.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great story please keep writing

KazuyaKazuyaover 8 years ago

Great start next chapter should be longer getting the sister in on the action

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more

Good story. Glad she had realistic dimensions. Now they have 200 miles of truth or dare left. I'm sure he could learn some truths about his wife. Le('s get her involved.

DakotaJayneDakotaJayneover 8 years ago
So good

I fucked myself to this story as they got hot and heavy, so did I.

Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What happens when

You got to carry it on she is living with him now...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Keep going

You need to keep going with this story like the sister and his wife or a threesome of truth or dares

erotikoserotikosover 8 years ago
Nice Job!

Well written, with good grammar, usage, punctuation and spelling. The sexual descriptions were erotic and entirely credible. Keep up the good work, I gave it a solid "5" stars.

cannon4201cannon4201over 8 years ago
Needs to keep going.

You need to add the wife to the story next.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 8 years ago
nice story

great story. I love how the characters we real, and not described as potential models or porn stars. The situation was realistic and the dialogue was natural. now I just need to find someone who can make me squirt!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOOOO!

Cummed to this but needs a little more work SEXI!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story!

Loved it. Can't wait for part 2!

ragini15ragini15over 8 years ago
wow.....

Hot story.....

She should had dared to let you come inside her......

Her moaning was missing while you filled inside her....

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusover 8 years ago
very good

one note; ".....her legs shutter" should be ".....her legs shudder"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More!!!!!! Loved this

So sexy and I loved the way it built up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it!

This begs for a 2nd chapter. Great theme and build up.

OzzycanOzzycanover 7 years ago
more!!

great story!! I hope there's going to be another chapter!

dietz10000dietz10000about 6 years ago
Umm

I detect a ring of truth in your story

I dare you to tell me If I'm correct

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

oh the cliff hanger!

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Very Nice

Fine writing and it left me wanting more.

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