All Comments on 'Truth or Dare'

Hi Chip. I don't comment much and I'm not highly critical but this story needs a lot of work. There are typo's, grammar issues, poor descriptions and of course it is way too short and not worth reading. Take it down and start over. Good luck on the next try!

Very much agree with all the points below - specially about the brevity of the piece.

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Not bad

That was a beginning no middle no end.... looked like this was opening only. What happened

This story has a good plot, but needs tons of work. Your opening was thin, and it ended during character development. Find a good editor and work with them, you will develop into a good author. Be patient. If you need help you can contact me at krazicat99@gmail.com