All Comments on 'Truth or Treat'

thizz storie be sizzlin for da srtaight people

you are a very good writer

Sexy, and well written.

Thanks a million, awesome erotic stories that aren't about incest are the best thing in the world.

Very sexy, fantastic! Write more!

Skilled writing, erotic tension throughout. I was hard as a rock reading the whole thing! Pieater

They should give out the big woody award for great stories , and I vote here is for the woody to go for your works here , PLEASE keep them cumming Thanks

HOT STORIES

Great build up. Even though we knew where they would end up,I read quickly to get there. Well done.

Sorry only read the first few paragraphs (they were long, so I did read some) but story really didn't work for me.

Great writing, does the job. Wife and I got really turned on.

Uniquely contrived to hold the reader's rapt attention. An easy 5*!

Very good writing. Excellent buildup to an earth shattering conclusion. Only thing that would have made it better would have been a true four-way. Well, maybe I would have left out the non-consensual stuff with Jared fondling Andrea while she was passed out.

This was a great story, with some neat creative turns. Kept my interest to the end. It would have been even better if it had become a true foursome! Perhaps the only change would be to remove the non-consensual touching of Andrea by Jared when she was passed out.

This author now writes as "Kirsten Macurran" amazon.

Very hot story!

I reread this occasionally. It's one of the best, and what made me keep looking for more on Literotica.

I had a love/hate reaction to this story when I first read it 20 years (Really? I've been reading stories here for that long?) Posted in 2001. Now that's a Space Odyssey.

Great story. Well constructed and extremely hot. Thanks.

Ridiculous plot and terrible writng. I gave up after the first page. 'peek' instead of 'peak'; 'materiel' intead of 'material'; 'who's bed' instead of 'whose bed', etc.

Hot sex 'scenes' maybe a bit long in the tooth, but a 5* tale.

The thing I like about this story is that the antagonist is not a particularly bad guy. There’s nothing worse than reading a story like this where the antagonist is a complete c#*t who has no comeuppance. This was just smoking hot all the way through. I loved it. 5*

i liked this tale,,got to be a bit overlong,,sometimes more is not more,,found myself wanting it to just end and skipping over some parts..

Very nice story. Like how the events slowly unfold right to the rxplosive end.

The groping of a barely conscious drunk Andrea by Jared, when he placed her on the bed added nothing to the story. Except for that incident, Jared did nothing wrong. Jared and Andrea simply were not friends, though both were attracted to each other. Andrea seems like an idiot, who was shown to be a slut when she is drunk. It seemed that Maria, Seth, and Jared were conspiring from the beginning to make the swap happen. They merely needed to place Andrea into the right situation.

Very nice job