All Comments on 'Try Before You Buy'

by TanyaSilver

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Tense Shifts Everywhere

A simple way to make your writing much stronger.is to make sure you stay in the same tense. Don't see "feels" one sentence and "felt" the next. It's jarring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Read the cats, people.

The author classified it as non-con and that is what it is. No mention of BDSM.

I think it is well written and a good start to a series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Hot!

Very hot! Well done, I want more... I want to read about him sticking that bad boy up her tight little ass and also what happens after he buys her!

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