All Comments on 'Tuesday Afternoon'

Great build-up to a really good climax (pun intended) to the story

Correct me if I'm wrong but I think you've set the stage for the brother and sister to develop a relationship.

Josh doesn't have a girlfriend and Jessie doesn't have a boyfriend much less a date for the prom. Seems like there has to be much more to this story!

RecHiker

Good job. You took a very cliched situation and wrote it into an interesting, well paced, and tender story. Bravo!

I am glad you enjoyed the story. This is only my second attempt at public writing. I do plan on writing a sequel, but don't know how deep this particular well is.

Thanks for the positive reviews.

A tender story, which needs a sequel. Make sure they are as tender as the first. Maybe include her girlfriend also.

inpregnated sister

Keep it going. This is fantastic.

he bitches about ted and then takes advantage of his sister seems he and ted are about the same sleeze bags.

Would have been a 5, except for Josh not pulling out and at least trying not to possibly fertilize his sister. That made him a shit.

Don't listen to ChasB, that was hot as hell!

He got it right the only way is just stick it up her and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy