All Comments on 'Tuition Ch. 04.5'

i love the story so far!!! while this chapter is interesting i think i prefer the other chapter four better, just for the story.

You just can't write an abusive character like Bastion and expect anyone to except he is in any effing way redeemable! This story and a few others as well should never have been posted in the BDSM category or confused with an acceptable depiction of the BDSM community. This in Non- Con and abuse. Period. Don't get me wrong. I'm not trying tell you what to write or even deny that your scenes aren't arousing but only because they ARE fictitious characters and NOT any actual reflection of acceptable BDSM practices. There is no financial manipulation or VISA blackmail that equals informed consent! Also the lack of safe words or ability to refuse unsafe actions is just another example of abuse.