All Comments on 'Tunnel of Love'

Personally, I don't like long drawn out stories. However, a story needs a built up before the climax...pun intended...just my opinion for what it's worth.

I just came across this comment, as I start to think about whether to add more to this story line or just leave it at this ending point. I guess I was hoping for a story like this to set the stage for your imagination, as a jumping off point. I'd love it if people wrote about what they pictured happening next and I could work that into the plot (assuming I ever manage to get back to writing). Anyway, if you'd like some more buildup before this story please read Ferris Wheel, and Fun House, which are set immediately prior to this scene. Thanks again for commenting!