All Comments on 'Turkish Delight Ch. 02'

I liked the intensity of this story. A bit abrupt for the ending. Still, a definite catcher.

Nice story with good characters A couple suggestions; I envision Umut as a slim, toned, cocoa brown boy with dark straight hair and full lips. His nipples are dark but pert and rest on mildly raised boy breasts. He is also very submissive and hungry. He wants the physical and emotional love of his father in Edward. Umut opens for edward to fill his mouth, throat and ass. He feels Edward's tongue slightly penetrate his hole and slide briefly into his warm hole. All this making Umut open and passionately receive Edward's penetrating mushroom head. etc. etc.