All Comments on 'Turkish Holiday Ch. 01'

by A_Satori

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well written

I really enjoyed this, hope we don't need to wait too long for the follow ups....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
!

I started at the beginning and skiped through the story. Typical story of faithful wife finding out she is a slut. Okay yes her husband cheated on her, so what move on! Don't drag your self down to his level. Which the wife has. The marriage is over the wife is now a single woman. She deserves all she gets.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderful...

I don't normally read long stories. They tend to drag. This was well written and fast moving. Bravo! I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Impressed

new forrester is a great one to follow and i'm totally impressed with your work here. I know how difficult it is to write these longer stories and keep the readers attention. Well written, well done and i too am looking forward to the sequeal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Looking Forward

Loved this story. Really looking forward to the next installment.

Charles PetersunnCharles Petersunnover 15 years ago
Look forward to the next one!

Really enjoyed it! Is the different font intentional? I am curious to try this.

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 12 years ago
^__^

You should seriously think about concluding some of your storylines, hehe. This story eerily reminds me of a Spanish movie called 'La Pasión Turca', but only in a way, regarding the story set. All in all, not my favourite story out of yourworks, but a good read nonetheless. Thanks again for providing so much quality adult entertainment. ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
?

Really good, but what about Part 2? Or have you written yourself into a corner?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You lost me when you showed she was British

and then used the US 'cell' instead of the British 'mobile' for her phone. At least you got arse right. An ass in Britain is a donkey-related animal, and about the un-sexiest thing imaginable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Just like Saturday night

Very sexy, and a cautionary tale!

mattenwmattenwalmost 2 years ago

Yes and now? When she comes home the divorce papers are waiting for her and then what? Then she can go back to the caraway Turks and continue working as a whore!

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