All Comments on 'Turnabout Institute Ch. 02'

I agree with the others. The first part was amazing, the second one was a let-down.

Too much stuff is happening to fast. The new Linda full of testosterone is despicable.

This is not a bad concept as it plausible that the sudden hormone switch changed her. The breach of trust was painful. It is not a bad thing to feel emotion from a story. So this could be a win

However, the new full of testosterone Linda has no respect and James shouldn't accept to be played around like this. It is the sudden acceptance from James that bothers me. The story is written from his point of view and I feel the end was rushed. He shouldn't feel happy about the ending and there is no way he has full trust in her anymore. The new Linda has way more work to do in other to win back his trust.

Anyhow, rushed ending for a great well written concept. Thank you for your story!

What if she got pregnant which caused them to not be able to swap back? Part 3??/

That was a terrible conclusion. Serious breach of trust and it made them look like a couple of unmarried, horny teenagers. Lost all respect for them and the fictional story.

Chapter 1 started so well that I couldn't wait for the next installment. Disapointment City. Full of spelling and grammar errors, missing words, Chapter 2 is just the usual Literotica where every bit of kink gets thrown into the story and the novlty of the original concept is lost

I see why no one reads you stories. Less than 5000 views means no one cares. But you seem to be beloved by Lit. Never have so many bad stories scored so highly.