by Wifetheif
Very good beginning. I'd like to see more details for the sexual acts. Make them last longer, at least in words. And some kink would be nice also, like maybe Fatima's fingers explore Linda's rosebud. Just explore, not necessarily go into. As an example. But great job so far.
but i want to see her side and if she was faithful...more please there was a vignette with the main characters of Star Trek going through the same thing on a pleasure planet with Spock being the Alpha male and Kirk and McCoy as women, but they did not play like this.
i wonder about the two condoms in the commode
Good start, love to see how the story(s) progress, as you could have Linda's point of view during the swap as well. Plus if Linda and James get revenge on the abusers of the first night!