All Comments on 'Turned into a Sissy Slut Ch. 01'

Looking forward to more

why are those command words so unoriginal?

Well, whatever good stuff

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bERGLaj_gVc

When the chapten 2 cant wait

WOw Ethan, great job! Keep it up!

I agree , a chapter 2 is eagerly anticipated , this is a hot story congrats on a great start , I too am new , have no writings as yet , but definitly appreciate this great story

loved the story, want to see the next chapter.

This was awesome, i love these stories! I've bookmarked you. please please keep it up!

I find I can't really find anything particularly wrong with your writing, and even enjoyed your writing style a great deal. However, being Wiccan, I found myself rather mortified with one thing. The first rule of wicca, always has been and will be, "Do no harm." This means physically, emotionally, or mentally. And not only that, but you seem to have no real clue as to how the craft actually works.

Spelling, incantations, casting, none of these have a bad effect on your soul. But everything you do, will always come back on you, by the power of three. So always put good out into the universe.

I'm glad you're having fun, writing out some fantasies and whatnot, but what I'm mortified with is your complete and utter lack of understanding of our very peaceful practice. The fact that you view us like this is more than a little disturbing. I think you would've done better to just write a made up religion, rather than demonize wiccans by making Ashley do what she did while labeling herself Wiccan.

It was so fun XD I enjoy the gradual build up as well! I'm looking forward to the next part, you've been book marked! Don't let me down <3

Love the build up, where's the rest?? :)

Loved the pace, the story, the potential for this young man's coming punishment. More please! :-)

Man, that's great, I've really enjoyed a lot your story.

Seems a little harsh; she spit in his cup first. I'd throw it out too.

What a perfect sissy. :)

Need part 2.

This is why it is vitally important to burn witches on sight. Not that they have power, because they don't. But because they are such terrible people.