All Comments on 'Turnings'

by patricia51

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
rgraham666rgraham666over 15 years ago
Nice

I love how you're developing this character, patricia.

curiousisjanecuriousisjaneover 15 years ago
yummy

loved it Patricia, remember me....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Just lovely

she's getting better, this Serena

I really love what Nan is doing to her :)

And the masturbation scene was pure art

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent Story line

This is an excellent story, Serena's character is absolutely out of this world, it will be interesting to see what will happen if she meets once again her nameless friends, the soccer mum and the business exec. Wish the scene with Nan was completed, one wonders if Serena really enjoyed Nan taking her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A wonderful story

Hi Patricia you have done it again a wonderful sensuallyy erotic sexxxxxie passionate and so very real your sexxxx scene are so real they will keep anyone HOT AND HORNEY.. Do you get hot writting these scenes>???? your blind reader John

PredatorSmilePredatorSmileabout 14 years ago
Being butch and submissive is HOT

I am a femme who's dated lots of butch women. And the submissive butch women are the hottest. good story.

takemetotheedgetakemetotheedgeover 13 years ago
WHEW!!

De Ja Vu! Well the last part of your story anyway. How ever did you get inside my mind and find my well kept secret? I had that one filed under "this one goes to the grave with me" file along with other naughty little gems. There are other stories {although something leads me to believe that there is some truth dotted throughout your tales} that you have written that delve into my own past {ok some are present}. Would luv to chat with you {more meeting of the minds and comparing notes}. Hope to hear from you soon.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous