All Comments on 'Turtle Bay Golf Ch. 01'

Hell I never get golf partners like you. Nice story. Well done. Good build up and scene setting.

You are such a sexy woman Beth.... can't wait to hear what happens when you awake from your nap....

Travel Girl,

I am not much of a golfer, but I am going to take the game up now on the chance I may run into you sometime. Great story, you kept my dick hard the whole time. Write more!!!!

Great story! Someitmes truth is better than fiction. Combines three of my favorite things - golf, nude sunbathing, and al fresco fucking! The buildup gave it the verisimilitude to make the serendipity irrestible. Who would have thought that a scientist could write so well and erotic? Tell us more of yourself and your adventures.

Great Story, i enjoyed ever sentence. you have an unusual ability to write, very discriptive and detailed. love it

...be waiting 6 months for part two!

I am re-reading your series in chronological order. Great stuff, I check frequently to see if there's more. Gary

love your stories. have read almost all of them, and like them more and more, especially when i go back and read others.

i love your pacing too, maybe im not as impatient as some others.

You are one of my favorite writers!

I like your style: very real and enables the reader to feel part of it.

The way you set up the story is what makes it so good. I also love the female view. I'm headed to Ch02!!

Beth,

Thanks for your response and continue to write your memorable experience stories and I will read them and again you are my favorite author.

Huff

Travel Girl,

Really love your stories and style. Just getting around to enjoying some of your earlier works. I'm going to pace myself. Saving Ch02 to cherish for the next occasion.

Best regards.

You're one of my favourite authors Beth, I love the way you build up the interaction and tension with your characters in all of your stories (at least the ones I have read).

I am looking forward to reading them all, please keep writing, it's erotica at its best!

Golf is now my favorite four-letter word! Great story, Beth.

GREAT.. PERFECT

Really loved the story. I loved the build up. Perfect, Thanks

As always a great story!!!

Beth you are one hot lady and a magnet for men who want to "play" with you. Excellent erotic writing. When are you going to "go all the way" let a guy come in you?

Great writing and sounds like great fun at the beach.

This is so fucking hot! What a babe!!

Nothing like 2 guys getting the best golf "score" of their lives. Sounds like Travel Girl is really good at swinging on the links. She could be my golf partner any day!

Wow!

I think I will take up golf. A good hot story, pity she didn't get dp, then it would have been even hotter

Love the progression, awesome.

Great story and very well written! I lived on Oahu For 6 years back in the late 80s and early 90s so have played that coarse a few times but never had that experience!

A really fun story and when they were on the beach it became very erotic and sensuous. I love it how you describe things, especially your total sexual enjoyment...it is thoughtful and polite :)