All Comments on 'Twelve Days a Slave Ch. 02'

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KindAsCakeKindAsCakeover 8 years ago
The hair!

Why is her hair permanently removed? I can understand the shaving as part of punishment but no eyebrows or hair on your head for life? Literotica has made me realize how much I like my hair! I am seriously bothered by this. Learned something new about myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I completely agree with kindascake. I feel like the no hair thing just ruined the entire series for me which is really disappointing because I really liked the idea behind the series. I find it too disturbing for whatever reason and I really hope you do another version of this where they humiliate her without doing something like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I'm out.

The hair thing was just stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

this was not good it was Game of Thrones and that scene was not sexual it was awful this takes things to a level that is just sick

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
....JUST NO

I feel like this is just torture in a not appealing way, I feel like people died with more dignity in concentration camps, they seem like they are preforming a punishment that ends in her death

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great

I completely disagree with the other comments, and thought the hair removal was very hot indeed. Brilliant series so far, not your run-of-the-mill.

maddictmaddictabout 8 years ago
missy

I like what they did to your hair and cuff. It can't be all bad think of the time you will save. Its not how you feel its how you look, and

"You look Marvellous. "

*~*

Better than Netflix for bingeing on a story/writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Crazy. Unrealistic. But, again, degragation in "setting the scene" for the remaining chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice

it was good. Not sure how i felt about the hair removing thing but otherwise it was great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The person who wrote this story needs serious help mentally seriously this is not hot not cool not a turn on not sexy this is like torture horror at the beginning of a horror movie let be honest here this is very very very degrading very very disturbing very disgusting this went to damn far in my opinion

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