All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 02'

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dee0688dee0688about 10 years ago

liking this story cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please

I have loved an unreasonable man, your stories are beautiful and I would like more please.

sassysuzazsassysuzazabout 10 years ago
More

Your story made me horny and wet. I am waiting for more chapters and instructions. Xo

happy_blokehappy_blokeabout 10 years ago
I really liked this

a bit scary perhaps, quite erotic. I don't normally read this section, I hope it stays on the erotic side of control.

jhollanderjhollanderabout 10 years ago
Very well written!

Just read the first two chapters back to back and truly enjoyed them! While I wish there wasn't the threat of abandonment if she refuses an order, I love the relationship they're developing. Not to mention....very, very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very Sexy

Love these chapters, and eager for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hooked

I'm totally hooked! Eagerly looking forward to the next chapters.

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