All Comments on 'Twelve Pleasure Slaves Ch. 01'

by elucipher

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fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
In Xanadu did Kubla Khan...

...A stately pleasure-dome decree ...:

elucipher, truly an erotic tale, of insatiable lust amidst languorous pleasures.

With modern sensibilities, Coleridge could have written "Twelve Pleasure Slaves"

...Where Alph, the sacred river, ran

Through caverns measureless to man

Down to a sunless sea....

A sunny pleasure-dome with caves of ice!

...A damsel with a dulcimer

In a vision once I saw:

It was an Abyssinian maid,

And on her dulcimer she played,

Singing of Mount Abora.

Could I revive within me

Her symphony and song,

To such a deep delight 'twould win me,

That with music loud and long,

I would build that dome in air,

That sunny dome! those caves of ice! ...

It will be fascinating {Classical definition} to see how you develop these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!

this made my cunt incredibly wet

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