All Comments on 'Twenty Questions'

by Carol_J

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hypnosis without the sex

i loved how you were able to make the story focus more on hypnosis than the sex aspect usually associated with these stories. You also did Disney Proud! would love a sequel where someone hypnotizes them both!

OblimoOblimoabout 6 years ago

It amazes me how many fetishists were quickened by Disney and other cartoons. Although I think it’s a chicken-vs-egg kind of paradox.

Anyway, the dialog in this story is phenomenal!

...so what go you into hypnosis, Carol? Please don’t say Harry Potter, that will make me feel so damned old.

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 5 years ago
That was really well written.

It drew me in completely. They make a very interesting couple. Thanks.

ShwareaShwarea9 months ago

Oh my god Carol you're a gem, if you published these they would sell you're seriously good, I am reall grateful for this

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