All Comments on 'Twerk, Little Sister Pt. 03'

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SorchakSorchakover 7 years ago
You really need to pay attention

to who your characters are. For the first two stories, the girl was named Brittany. Then suddenly she's Tiffany. And Scott become Tom once. I'd have given you three stars, except for this rather large mistake.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Dude’s an asshat

So, he’s saying that if he’d gotten anyone else pregnant, he wouldn’t have cared?

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