All Comments on 'Twice Each Month'

I loved the story! Please continue with more if you are so inclined. You write well. I was quite intrigued the whole time! Wish this could happen to me.

Very well written story of a lover using force to overcome an uptight cunt to please her. my gf loved it. More nastier chapters please.

Great descriptions, well thought out scenes. Extremely hot! Everything was there. I am eager to see more...

Loved! A rare occasion that I read a story all the way through. Extremely hot. This is my fantasy, 'cept I just pretend to be inhibited. Definitely hot.

Just kidding. Neither of you 'raped' the other, but you write it for the effect of course (tha's ok). You might be be surprised to learn that some couples play plenty of money to sex therapists in order to get to the point where the characters in your story have arrived on their own. Every thing goes under the title of games and fantasy, and as long as Rumplestiltskin stays the trusted guardian every one is safe...<P>

Not only was your story original, it was both written well and erotic - the whole package!

Absolutely LOVED it! Definitely made this fantasy of mine even hotter!!

Thanks :) It was a pleasure to read.

these two will be together forever.they communicate.that is the key to a successful lasting relationship.i pray Jesus blesses me with a man again.and that i can have exactly the same kind of relationship as these two.thanks joe for expressing how in some relationships"rape"works.peace,mam. ps please write more about these two.

God that shit get's old it is not a light switch if the woman is doing a good job or feels good enough you might last a while longer but not when YOU want.

Rape is still Rape when someone says, "No, Stop, Let me go"!

The comment about rape is still rape.. They have a safe word. It is consenual non consent. Read the entire piece. It is not just implied. It is part of their understanding.

I very much enjoyed your writing. Certainly made me sit up and take notice!

Yawn