All Comments on 'Twice the Hands to Hold'

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buzzie1969buzzie1969about 9 years ago
hot

Hot story, great writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Brian (the elder brother) is 18

which makes Matt younger than the age required on this site...just sayin

Normally it wouldn't bother me, but with the subject of incest involved, I'd prefer kids not made to do that

skankabouttownskankabouttownabout 9 years agoAuthor
They are twins - same age

Brian and Matt are identical twins, which makes them the exact same age bar a few minutes' apart. They are both over eighteen and seniors in high school. Read the original story and you'll get more about their background <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
very Good Story

I preferred it being..only Brian & Matt... in the incest relationship... which.. throughout the story.. one can tell.... Brian truely loves Matt as his own partner.... but with the Uncle included.... now.. Brian cant have Matt... solely to himself.. an you can see the..difficulty Brian goes thru...

Great story...and also... as another anonymous put.... prefer... Brian being (19) an Matty being younger (18)... as required here....

aclassyladyaclassyladyabout 9 years ago
Fabulous!!!

Again you out did yourself. Wonderful story and it was a 4.5 star story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

They are twins which makes them the same age. Brian was born exactly 17 minutes before Matt per the original story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

why cant you do some thing diferent to others instead of going straight to the nipple and tweeking why not try and build the story up before every one starts shagging . same old crap .sorry

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Condoms, Really??

this story was amazing and had so much promise until it was ruined by condoms!! In a fictional story? Why?? What's the point other than than to

Make it less hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

That was amazing! Not only was it hot and consential but it was beautifully written. Thank you for that

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another absolutely amazing read from you!!!

Everyone was so beautifully depicted. And you captured not only their love but also their trust for each other brilliantly. Also, jake having second thoughts and putting his own needs aside at the beginning to ensure that the boys were comfortable with it all truly hit it home for his characterisation here. I haven't read the initial story but still enjoyed it very much. Glad to know that both of them are twins and above eighteen which would have otherwise ruined a perfect story (maybe adding a little note in the beginning though would help)

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 1 year ago

I agree regarding condoms. There's no need for them. All 3 of them are clean and disease free, right? It did detract a bit.

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