All Comments on 'Twilight Express Ch. 01-07'

Lovely story and we hope you will continue with her adventures. Perhaps with others in Sapporo ?

A very intriguing beginning. Simple, to the point, very well written.

Perhaps the hero of the story knows Japanese bondage techniques...maybe we might get a nice D/s side of the story with a taste of romance. :-)

In any case, no matter where you take this story, I look forward to your next installment.

Very good story. I can't wait to read more. I hope you develop more of the relationship/feelings between the characters. I think you can develop one of those intense romantic d/s relationships. I hope it doesn't get as extreme as some of the other postings are suggesting though.

It reminded me of when I lived in Japan back in the 80s.

Lovely and a great read! More Asian men and white women parings please!!! :) Linda in MI

One of the most gentle, graceful and gracious stories I have read in such a long long time. This wonderful writer's plot didn't seem hurried at all, at times gracefully meandering along all the time the story's building blocks were falling in place. When the little seduction scene finally appeared it was soft, sweet and tenderly erotic. A Terrific Write! A most pleasant and sensual read!

Very well written. Goes along with a nice easy pace. Hope we'll read more chapters of the same plot shortly.

One of the best stories I've read since joining Literotica. Places me vividly into the moment and the setting and cultures play a key role in the story. A slow burn seduction. A level of detail and style I'll strive for in my own stories. Can't wait to read the next chapters!

This was incredibly erotic! Thank you!

ありがとう、作者さん。　可愛くてセクシーだった。